tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4305672422028457718.post8824376520951143614..comments2014-01-05T12:28:12.014+00:00Comments on Lekti Rose Jacobs: Cinematic Spaces - More ThumbnailsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4305672422028457718.post-69823084754994995732012-10-18T20:01:40.458+01:002012-10-18T20:01:40.458+01:00Hey Lekti - sorry to hear you've been a bit cr...Hey Lekti - sorry to hear you've been a bit crook of late, but you've obviously been working very hard in regard to invigorating your conception of these spaces. I think you should consider going back to those line thumbs and using them to create a more expansive composition, because your thumbs hint at a more epic spce, which your cropping denies - use these as acorns from which to grow a bigger glimpse! :)tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4305672422028457718.post-86773637999492019922012-10-18T15:39:38.994+01:002012-10-18T15:39:38.994+01:00Hey Lekti these look cool I can see what you mean ...Hey Lekti these look cool I can see what you mean by the scale seeing as it all seems to look the same size and close to the same colour so maybe if you use a lighter colour to show those branches are the further part of the tree and darken the closer ones?<br />GeorgeHindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15739613555226413007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4305672422028457718.post-41699912700726530092012-10-18T15:14:12.079+01:002012-10-18T15:14:12.079+01:00Whoops! :) Why not try layering on some textures b...Whoops! :) Why not try layering on some textures by dropping in photos on the trunk/root? Also, I do think that once your foreground elements are in place, the large tree may start to look more integrated... as it does in fig 2.Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4305672422028457718.post-41235117657409991602012-10-18T13:42:56.999+01:002012-10-18T13:42:56.999+01:00@Lucy - Thanks :D i'm just not happy with the ...@Lucy - Thanks :D i'm just not happy with the shape xD<br /><br />@Jackie - Its meant to be a glowing field of flowers, i just haven't added detail yet. the one closer to the foreground will make it more apparent. :P I was intending to add the foreground elements to the image but i started to be really unhappy with the large tree. :3Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16728520033250539967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4305672422028457718.post-1616605776412808812012-10-18T13:11:09.799+01:002012-10-18T13:11:09.799+01:00Figure 6 is starting to have something going for i...Figure 6 is starting to have something going for it - I like the glow coming off the water. I think when you add a darker foreground element, such as the spikey vegetation in fig 2, it will help with the depth issues. Keep going!! :)Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4305672422028457718.post-32176375373767250832012-10-18T12:42:26.946+01:002012-10-18T12:42:26.946+01:00These are freaking awesome! I like the base, but i...These are freaking awesome! I like the base, but if you're unhappy, I cant wait to see when you improve it. Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07917853224826630062noreply@blogger.com