tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4305672422028457718.post839598539264120727..comments2014-01-05T12:28:12.014+00:00Comments on Lekti Rose Jacobs: Unit 3: A refined Animation IdeaUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4305672422028457718.post-58093454061238868572013-01-20T11:46:37.196+00:002013-01-20T11:46:37.196+00:00Hey Lekti,
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http://ucarochester-cgartsa...Hey Lekti,<br /><br />See link!<br /><br />http://ucarochester-cgartsandanimation.blogspot.co.uk/2013/01/fao-cgaa-years-1-2-uca-student-survey.html<br /><br />Cheers! :Dtutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4305672422028457718.post-16638426394897602562013-01-19T17:51:33.065+00:002013-01-19T17:51:33.065+00:00Evening Lekti,
Yep - this is going places now, bu...Evening Lekti,<br /><br />Yep - this is going places now, but I share Jackie's idea in regard to how non-linearity might be a great way of structuring your story in a dynamic way. It seems that there's no real point in making your chef a former-biker... it doesn't contribute to your story. Obviously, a chef might indeed ride a motor-cycle, but don't confuse your audience unnecessarily. Personally speaking, I find the impalement of the rabbits too graphic for the toony tone of your story; the joke works just as well if you simply assert the 'rabbit and cactus pie' recipe, because the audience knows very well that the chef is killing them somehow - essentially making his enemy into his profits.tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4305672422028457718.post-32157772887534686302013-01-17T07:36:46.335+00:002013-01-17T07:36:46.335+00:00Hi Lekti, a couple of points from me - firstly, I ...Hi Lekti, a couple of points from me - firstly, I think in order to make the story more rounded,you could tell it in a non-linear way - you could start with the farmer/bakers original sign, say 'Jack's Famous Pumpkin Pies' crossed out and 'Sorry- no pumkins' scrawled under it (so this is in effect the 2nd scene being told first.)You could have a dejected-looking baker sitting at a run down farm cafe, having a flashback to the jack-rabbits moving in and destroying his crop (the first scene). The back to the present,where the farmer tries to deter the rabbits and ultimately ends up with his new invention, the rabbit and cactus pie. End on a view of a new sign and a bustling cafe.<br /><br />Also, what is the relevance of the farmer/baker having been a biker? Is this a necessary element to your story?Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com